tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089654244913180142.post8482265945174065010..comments2010-02-02T16:01:08.855-08:00Comments on Winnie the Pooh: "Eleven minutes"Iva Slavovahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16577002636198929626noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089654244913180142.post-915195896534732502009-12-06T02:18:41.792-08:002009-12-06T02:18:41.792-08:00Iva :)
"Eleven Minutes" by Paolo Coehllo...Iva :)<br />"Eleven Minutes" by Paolo Coehllo is one of my favorite books as well. Your review describes the book really well. I like the fact that you have explored your emotions and the way they were affected by the book. It is one of the parts that every book review should have in my opinion. You have analyzed the style of the author and I agree with your opinion on this topic. You say that he uses "vulgar words and expressions". These are really affecting not only for a teenager but for everyone. Afterall, people enjoy reading for the taboos that life tries to cenzorize. <br />I like the fact that you have found sense in the book. A lot of people consider Paolo Coehllo as an author that is read only by skinny models. Actually his books have far more deeper impact, and your review shows this. I like the fact that you share so much in your review. It seems like you got very emotional when you read the book, and I am sure that you did. I, personally, felt the same way when I read it. I like that you have noticed the honesty that is so typical for Coehllo’s style. I like the structure of your review. You start with an intro, then you share some impressions that really shock you even in the first pages. You tell theplot in a short summary, and then you share your own feelings and emotions. I think that your review is really honest, and that is what makes it so awesome. <br />You should work on your grammar a bit more. I mena that you have some words that are not in their place. For example: "I though that the it is not" The "the" should not be there and also there should be one t in the end of thought. Anyone your grammar mistakes are on-the-go and you will correct them easily if you read the review once.<br />I really enjoyed reading your commentary. It made me remember how I felt when I read the book. You have done a very good job :)Antoniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08172760555774444580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089654244913180142.post-90415908130132755422009-12-06T02:11:48.897-08:002009-12-06T02:11:48.897-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Antoniahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08172760555774444580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9089654244913180142.post-56696816069595471312009-12-01T20:16:15.961-08:002009-12-01T20:16:15.961-08:00It seems interesting. Prostitution?? lol Wow. Bu...It seems interesting. Prostitution?? lol Wow. But it must be an extremely powerful book if it could alter your emotions like that, to make you feel alone even when you were with friends. That kind of an impact isn't found in the everyday novel, so I'll have to pick up a copy next time i'm at the bookstoreCassaundra Kampsenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04683621356487937629noreply@blogger.com